Descriptive Writing Term 3

For the last few weeks we have been using descriptive language in our writing. This is a sample of my descriptive work... 

Little Garden Descriptive Writing

The lime green stalk of the flower stood alone waiting for the flower to bloom. Hot pink coloured petals made the room glow as they started to move slightly. The petals started to open and flutter down towards the stalk. 

The yellow nectar in the centre of the flower looks like mini roses waiting to be smelt. The bright pink flower almost looked like it was popping open like kids popping candy. The graceful flower finally finished it’s beautiful blooming as I leaned over to smell the centre of the elegant neon pink and yellow flower. 

I shuffled over and looked at another flower, this gorgeous flower had a sky blue sort of tone to it. I waited a while until it finally started to come to life. It opened and I could see a dark navy blue centre. Whenever I see a flower ready to bloom, I get excited because you never know what it's going to look like on the inside. Like if there is a new chocolate flavour, you never know what it's going to taste like. It may taste sweet and delightful or powerfully disgusting. 

Different shades of blue brightens up the whole bouquet of flowers resting together peacefully. I've seen many different colours today and I've experienced how beautiful flowers bloom. I wish to come back next spring and watch it all again.

We have also been going to writing workshops throughout the week. I opted into the idioms workshop, here is a photo of my workshop work...